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Sunday, August 27, 2017

Book Corner: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer



1/3 Really Good Book, 2/3 Why Does This Exist?




This book has had me at a loss for several years now.  I've heard so many negative things about it that kept me away, yet at the same time, people whose opinions I respect all say that it was a perfectly fine or even "good" series of books.  Two of my friends, fellow authors, actually love the series highly.  So here I've been all these years, unable to reconcile this conflicting information.  How can such smart and highly creative people love something so bad?  I knew even back then when the Twilight craze was at its peak that I'd be reading the first book of the series one day to appraise it firsthand.  Here's that review.

Twilight is a mixed bag, that's for sure.  After struggling through the first 25% of the book, I was certain that I would be giving it a 1 star by the end.  That feeling stretched on well past the halfway point of the book.  This is mainly due to the spotlight here being on Edward and Bella's dull, slow, tease of a relationship if you could even call it that because it was mostly just Bella being desperate for the attention and affection of male model Edward Cullen whose appearance she couldn't go more than one paragraph commenting on.

So, we get to the major problem with the book, the two main characters.  Boring Bella, Bland Edward, and their unappealing romance.

Sunday, March 8, 2015

Indie Book Corner: Eyes of the Sun, by Christina McMullen




http://www.amazon.com/Eyes-Sun-Book-ebook/dp/B00A7L7GJ0
Free Today 3/8/2015 and Typically On Sale Often

A science fiction take on vampirism more akin to (the good) Blade movies than Nosferatu.


I liked this book, a lot!  It has a lot going for it.  Interesting characters, check.  Engaging dialogue, check.  Likable main character, check.  Cool premise, check.  A sense of humor, check.  Does it stand out from the crowd of other vampire fiction, triple check!  Eyes of the Sun hits every point on my like-o-meter and then some.

Vampires
So vampires are a thing here, yes, but they are not at all what you think they are.  I'll leave the explanation to the author.  But it's interesting because it's all influenced by biology and evolution.  Run of the mill humans are more similar to vampires than one would think.  Some humans have even evolved an enzyme inside of their blood that can prove harmful or even fatal to vampires as a biological deterrent to getting preyed upon.  So when they're getting the life drained out of them by one of the bloodsuckers they can pull a Call of Duty 'Martyrdom' type move and drop the proverbial grenade on their vampiric foes to get the last laugh.  Vampires also come in different breeds here.  Some have been genetically modified to possess stronger vampire traits and some, the highest in the social order, are inbred from ancient families to achieve a purity in their bloodlines.  Whatever form of vampire you have they're all stronger, faster, and more agile than humans.

But...

The humans have technology.
That reminds me of the awesome F2P multiplayer game Nosgoth which is based around this very concept.  Vamps have the powers but humans have the tools.  The humans in question here are members of the EJC, which I'll admit is a slight spoiler for like the first three chapters.  Anyway the EJC seems like an ordinary research company to the uninitiated but is actually a tight nit group of very dedicated men and women who take to the streets at night to combat these vampires.  They use technology developed in-house and have been specifically trained for the eradication of the vampires preying on people on the city streets.  The EJC's technology is much improved over what we use today but it's not too far removed.  It seems that to be a member you have to have the enzyme that proves fatal to vampires in your blood, I'm not sure if I misremembered that or not.  They have a complex system of hunters, scientists, doctors, watchers, and a...makeup artist to aid in their goal of protection of the human race.

It has...

Moral Complexity.
Is killing the vampires right?  Do they deserve punishment?  It's not so cut and dry of an answer just like real life.

Social issues aren't shied away from.
What happens when you pair a gay, anti-religious, anti-war vampire hunter with a huge, religious, military veteran vampire hunter?  Well hilarious needling for one.  But also an actual conversation about these issues straight up.  Nothing preachy but it is addressed as Lucy tries to figure out just how these two haven't destroyed each other yet.

Which leads to...

A likable, funny, tough, and complex cast.
Every time I was introduced to a new character I found something fascinating about them or just found them enjoyable.  Just like real life, these fictional characters are complex and multifaceted.  Even if you don't like something about them you may find a trait about them that you do like.  The dialogue was snappy and filled with wit and the character interactions were just equal parts hilarious and heartfelt.  You really get the feeling by the end of this that the EJC was like one big family.  It's really fun getting to know everyone.

There is romance and it's done really well.
Not much to say here without spoiling stuff.  I'll just say that it's obvious who gets together.  The author even hints at it through palm reading before we meet the love interest.  The joy here is in the journey, not the outcome and what a sexy journey it was.

The main character.
Lucy is pretty cool.  She's whip smart and mostly normal but has a nerdy streak.  She is educated, has a bit of a chip on her shoulders, and is quite used to losing family.  She starts this book alone in a new city with only two close friends, who it turns out she knows nothing about.  Lucy is naturally inquisitive and observant which are both good and bad traits in the world of vampire hunting and survival.  Another good and bad trait that's strong in her is her stubborn streak.  She just does not give up and when she feels a certain way it’s hard for her to simply 'go with the flow.'  She'll speak up and she'll make some changes before she accepts something she isn't comfortable with and *spoiler ahead* this makes her a very unorthodox yet effective vampire hunter.  Her reckless fighting style is actually pretty cool and makes sense for her in the beginning.  And *huge spoiler ahead* her blood, which is a combination of modified vampire and hunter, which is an incredibly rare mix may at first glance seem Mary Sue-ish but it's actually handled quite well and never makes Lucy boring or overpowered as many like to complain of characters with special traits like this.  The training here accounts for a lot and there was never a scene when I saw Lucy engage with a vampire that I didn't feel like she might just lose and lose badly.

The action is awesome.
It's fast paced, grounded, clever, and very descriptive.  No detail was missed here and the environment was used really well in all scenes.  Each fight feels very distinct because of this.  Because of my slight sexism I hadn't expected this from a female writer.  That was only a partial joke by the way and yes, I give you permission to hate me.

I said so much already that I feel the need to wrap this up.  So nothing is perfect and that brings me to...

What I didn't like.
The first few chapters felt rushed, specifically a big part of chapter 1 and some parts of chapter 2.  There was a big wall of info on Lucy's past on the second and third page at a moment when I couldn't care less about who Lucy was.  There's also a huge mistake that chapter 2 Lucy makes that the Lucy I've come to know didn't seem like she would have made but this I can forgive since the thought of love makes us all do crazy things.

Only one other small thing bothered me and it's so trivial that it doesn't really matter.  It's the retractable fangs.  I'm bothered by these, not because they exist but because they weren't given a contemporary scientific explanation like everything else.  I'll admit that there's a huge chance that I might've glossed over it but it seems strange that it's just part of the package like the rest since this vampirism isn't like 'normal' vampirism.  It just feels like a genre holdover but you know what?  How freaking' weird would a vampire with flat teeth be?  Answer: really freaking weird!  So I'll wrap this up by saying some questions don't need to be answered and some traditions must never die.

Now here's that summary of points that I know the abridgers like so well.

The Good
+Humorous
+Science Fiction Edge
+Smart Ideas
+Witty Dialogue
+Sexy Moments
+Lucy is Likeable and Competent
+Cast is Likeable, Funny, Tough, and Complex
+It's Fun Getting to Know Everyone
+Author Has the Courage to Talk About a Few Social Issues
+The Structure of the Organization is Clever and Interesting
+Dress Up Stuff is Cool, Fun, and Makes Sense

The Bad
-First Chapter Seems Rushed as a Lot of Info is Quickly Given on Lucy
-The Lucy I've Come to Know Doesn't Seem Like She'd Make the Same Stupid Mistakes That She Did With Tim at the Beginning

The Trivial
-Unexplained Retractable Fangs

Find it at


Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Eyes-Sun-Book-ebook/dp/B00A7L7GJ0
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17984582-the-eyes-of-the-sun
Author's Blog: http://mcmullenwrites.blogspot.com/

Check out my review of the book's sequel: Blackbeard's Children

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Indie Book Corner: Going Green by Christina McMullen






Quick reminder for those not familiar with my so called “reviews”.  I don’t review media in a traditional sense, that is to say that I don’t typically leave a score or rating unless I’m posting on a site that demands that sort of thing.  I don’t feel that I can adequately encapsulate my experience with a game or book or movie into a numbered score or even a lettered one.  I also don’t see a point in it.  If you typically read reviews for recommendations then I do typically leave a list of pros and cons of the material.

Going Green, by Christina McMullen is an ebook that I came across through an indie author group on Google+.  I have no idea which group it was because I’ve joined quite a few.  I caught this book, I believe, upon its very first release day.  It was free on day one and I snapped it up as fast as I could.  I did so partly to support another indie (with non-money) and partly to satisfy my curious reading habit.  It took me a while but I finally got around to reading it after a few months.

I found Going Green to be a clever, witty, and very original take on the clichéd zombie apocalypse genre.  Inside its pages I found a very sardonic and humorous take on life before, during, and after a future zombie outbreak.  The book is cynical as hell in its depiction of the reaches of mankind and how we have taken our carelessness into space and relegated NASA to space tourism duties.  A series a bad decisions involving drugs, explosions, space shuttles, showmanship, and radiation is made by a few characters and leads to the apocalyptic outbreak.  We see selfish government cover-ups, public ignorance, and poor decision-making in spades.  It’s just like the present day, except in Christina McMullen’s bleak future it’s hilarious.  We glimpse all this through well told vignettes featuring multiple characters.  Each character brings something new to the apocalyptic tale and most I found to be humorous.  There was probably a bit of inappropriate laughing on my part as well.  I laughed a lot while reading this book.

I found all the set-ups here to be utterly plausible.  It was a future that I could clearly envision as I read the book, sadly enough.  Even outlandish scenes like the one involving a certain small time rock star – ahem – that is to say the Zombie Apocalypse Rock God Jaden Winslow – seemed plausible in this type of bleak future.  Imagine yourself on a day that could be the turning point for your future.  You’re set to have something really big happen for you, something positive that could change your life for the better.  Now imagine on that day, as you’re planning all the major details, one of your friends tells you that you can’t go through with it because of a zombie outbreak.  Some of you might just lose it and go a little stir-crazy.  Some of you, like me, might just do something a little stupid, reckless, and cathartic in response to the madness.

I’m not a big fan of zombies—at all.  I find them to be a boring trope, genre, creature, concept, or whatever you want to call them.  There’s some interesting ideas to be found in the concept but it’s been done to death (no pun intended) and not well I believe.  Once you’ve seen one shuffling brain-dead meat monster, you’ve seen ‘em all.  With all that said, I still found there to be a treasure trove of fresh and cool ideas in this short read.

The way the future is setup is pretty neat.  Space has become this “been there, done that” sort of thing and so now corporations have set up shop and begun making loads of dough on interplanetary tourism.  I also liked the fact that certain characters made viral videos in space and documented themselves as being the first to do something in space to get in the Guinness record books, even if that something was super mundane.  These zombies are also “different” in that they aren’t undead.  I don’t believe that’s a spoiler, it doesn’t really spoil anything.  In every other way these zombies do seem to behave like the stereotypical zombie in whatever media you choose to view them.  They’re slow, unintelligible, disease filled, and crave human flesh.  They are different in one major way apart from all that though, but revealing that would spoil a very interesting chapter and I aint gonna do that.

I loved just about every part of this book and think I’ll read it again pretty soon.  It was a very short read.  You can probably finish it during a long lunch break or siesta if you’re lucky enough to have those.  I didn’t find that to be a problem for this title.  It honestly made its point in its eighty-five pages.  I sat up late one night reading til about three in the morning, laughing like a madman.  I honestly don’t have any negatives unless you count that this book has made me a little self-conscious of my own writing.  Good books always tend to do that though so I just need to work on my humor more and read more good books.

Ya Dig!:
+Scary possible future
+Highly cynical
+Interspersed with humor
+Clever ideas and imaginative world
+Outlandishness grounded in reality
+Zombies are different
+JADEN WINSLOW: ZOMBIE ROCK GOD
+Smooth read

Watch out for:
-Short book length (though the pacing does feel good)

And that's about it, but don't just take my word for it.  Go check it out yourself with the links below.  Tell me what you think and as always, my glorious readers, thanks for the browse!

Author’s Blog

Amazon Book Link

Goodreads Book Link

Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Indie Book Corner: The Kingmaker by James G. Pearson

The Kingmaker by James G. Pearson

(Slight spoilers)


Kingmaker Cover 2

Do you like high fantasy?  Do you like epic sword battles and medieval speak, lords, ladies, lasses, lads, and the like?  Do you like magic, revenge, and murder?  Well then you will find a lot to enjoy in James G. Pearson’s the Kingmaker.  Below is my pseudo review.  I only briefly mention a numbered score because Amazon makes you do that sort of thing.  Usually I don’t bother.  Like here for instance.


THE COOL:

Amazing Opening Chapter

I first read a sample of this on Amazon and that sample was so awesome that I had to buy the book.  I wish this had an animation to it but that's the power of books.  We must use our overactive imagination.  The book opens with a man with a fancy and seemingly important title getting his belongings together as he prepares to run.  He is frantic and because of this his family is scared.  This man is the Kingmaker and we get the sense that he's in major trouble.  Unfortunately for him some royal knights from a country called Dalamar have caught up with him and now he and his young son Rhyn must fight for their lives.  The scene is so hopeless and yet father and son fight on anyway.  Surrounded as they are by countless soldiers, they try their best to survive.  What happens next is pretty sad and sets the stage for the rest of the book.


Enjoyable Plot and Engaging Characters

I liked the plot and characters quite a bit. While I would not call the characterizations in The Kingmaker complex by any means I still found a lot of the characters very enjoyable. I liked the young Kingmaker/Warrior Rhyn and his “bestie” Dirham. I thought Dirham had the best characterization in the entire book with all of the issues he was juggling, his love of his family, and his everyman attitude were highly appealing. I thought Rhyn himself was a really stand-up guy.  He was strong, heroic, and just but ultimately confused about his place in the world.  I felt that his reasons for being confused were justified but also felt that he should’ve been more torn apart and reluctant in dealing with the loss of his father and his adoptive new homeland. The other characters I liked were Carrick the medieval serial killer (though not initially) and the mysterious masked man. The plot had enough twists and turns to keep me interested and turning the page and the big plot changer that happens near the middle of the story really took me by surprise. Magic is definitely touched upon in the book too and used in some neat ways.  And you get to see what's going on from the various villains' point of view too which gives you a 360 degree view of the plot minus a degree or two from one very mysterious character towards the end.


 

THE NOT SO COOL:


What is the Kingmaker?

We’re never really told what the Kingmaker is. We know that the Kingmaker is important and that they are good at fighting but never told exactly what they can do. I think this book, particularly because of its title should inform us more about what a Kingmaker is, what they could do, and maybe even a little history of the Kingmakers but alas it isn’t so. And so at the end of the KINGMAKER: Book 1 of the KINGMAKER Saga I still know very little of what a Kingmaker actually does. Without a way to judge what the Kingmaker is potentially capable of I lost interest in Rhyn a few chapters in and then he finally admits to his true abilities and I saw him get defeated or near defeated in a few one-on-one skirmishes. So the hyping of the Kingmaker’s abilities was quickly lost on me early on.

There are a few examples of what the Kingmaker can do but none are game changing or show how this person can change the tide of a battle and end a war like we’re led to believe. Right off the bat the Kingmaker’s legend and mythos are disparaged when the initial Kingmaker shown is quickly killed by a small force and then right after when the second Kingmaker is easily captured for fuzzy reasons that are never wholly explained. And with that lie the bulk of my issues with the book.

Great Concepts Needed Better Utilization

For one the Leonhardt, a fierce army of half lion half men are described to be a vicious legendary transformation unseen for hundreds of years. It’s a transformation fueled by magic but the only prerequisites seem to be that you have the blood of the Leonhardt and sign a magical waiver. Indeed even newly army joined peasants can become Leonhardt. Titan Goldclaw uses 100,000 of these supposed crazy powerful warriors against an army only 5,000 strong and still loses a considerable amount of his soldiers. With numbers like that the point of a super strong transformation loses its meaning and necessity. It would have been more compelling for the Leonhardt to be only 500-2,000 strong, the underdogs, and have access to this sort of magic. It would make more sense since we’re initially shown the Lion kingdom to be in shambles without a strong military. If the Leonhardt had won that battle it would mean something, as it was though it just made them look weak and the transformation unimportant. Rhyn’s effortless kill of a Leonhardt Enforcer also did the Leonhardt no favors especially since he loses a duel to a mere human right after.

Legendary Leonhardt Transformation...or Digimon Season 4...

Legendary Leonhardt Transformation...or Digimon Season 4...

Legendary Leonhardt Transformation...or Digimon Season 4...




Fuzzy Logic

There is quite a bit of fuzzy logic to sift through too. Some of the plots made by the characters don’t quite add up. Some of the events that occurred make no sense considering the character’s motives. I found a lot of this but am not so crass as to spoil whole scenes to illustrate it. The one example I’ll share is with the whole raising of the Leonhardt army. The one was raised from next to nothing in a kingdom wide draft to serve a man that they should have hated for all intents and purposes. They were part of an isolationist kingdom that hadn’t seen war for hundreds of years and mostly comprised of peasants. Suddenly they, through custom/ancient law/word of king flock to the army in great numbers and now have access to a powerful transformation. The king has armor made specifically for these larger transformations and marches into a war with 100,000 transforming soldiers in order to fight a group of humans that only numbered 5,000. More fuzzy logic concludes with this group when that battle ends but revealing that would slightly spoil a scene or two. Also towards the end a group rises up to join the fight but I was thinking to myself “where the F where you the whole time? Couldn’t you see all that fire and death before?”


Too many POV’s

While I really liked the POV’s of Rhyn, Dirham, and Carrick and found the POV’s of Alanis and Lyssa to be useful, I felt overall that there were way too many voices telling this one story. The story isn’t complex enough to require anywhere near as many POV’s and even with the ones we do get it often times jumps sporadically to another character mid paragraph. Tiberius’ POV’s do offer an insight into story as well but I would much likely stick closer to Rhyn and learn more about his abilities, and what being a Kingmaker means to him, and just generally what a Kingmaker does. I would like more with Dirham and more with Carrick definitely. What makes Carrick the way he is, what is his ultimate goal? Titan Goldclaw was also a necessary POV but just felt two dimensional to me. If he wasn’t trying to conquer things I would have no interest in him whatsoever. And everyone else that was covered felt completely unnecessary to me. The author may be setting something up but with his subject matter he could do well to set it up in a more established character’s POV or make these characters more interesting.


A Final Round of Professional Editing

The book has a lot of grammar mistakes, I mean a lot! Towards the beginning there are only a few and you can gloss over them easily but towards the end they’re glaring and happen really often which takes you out of the experience. Luckily this is the easiest section to fix since the author can easily update the book here whenever. I’ve noted down the errors I’ve found in the notes but these can easily be rectified with a (competent) copyeditor.


Final Thoughts:

This book is filled with great concepts, interesting characters, and a fast paced plot that keeps you guessing. What it needs more of is POLISH. In every possible way it needs more polish. A brief study of war and war tactics can make those sieges and battles even more epic. Some study of swordplay and fighting can make those conflicts more authentic and engaging. A fleshing out of those great concepts can truly make those ideas shine. My advice? Pull back on servicing the plot and let the characters be themselves and let us in on their world. I’d rather learn more about Rhyn, Dirham, and Carrick than constantly jump around to move the plot forward. Don’t pull back too far on the mystery of the Kingmakers. At least tell us what they can do, what makes them better. That and a healthy dose of final edits by a professional would give this the 4/5 stars from me. Anyways still a good read and I look forward to the next (hopefully improved) adventure.

Update:

According to the author's blog and through a conversation I had with him I learned that he is hard at work on updating the content of The Kingmaker.  He has taken his reviews and other criticisms very seriously and looks to improve his story.  This is great news for me and other fans of this first book who loved the characters, plot, and setting but had some issues with the storytelling.  The author, James Pearson, is also currently hard at work on the sequel to The Kingmaker entitled Kingdomfall.  He's also completed two short stories to compliment his series. You can check out James' blog here at http://kingmakersaga.wordpress.com/.

Old Kingmaker Cover
You can find the book at:
Amazon US
Amazon UK
Goodreads

And the companion pieces at:
The Order of Talos: Bear of Yarmir
Amazon US
Amazon UK
Goodreads

The Order of Talos: Iridi's Embrace
Amazon US
Amazon UK
Goodreads